Peer Evaluation 2

I am going to write about Tuğçe Nur Çakal’s Reflection Task 2a. The paragraph that she wrote is about benefits and harm of technology. I liked it very much because this paragraph reflects the facts. She explained the benefits and harm of the technology very well by giving very good examples. When we do not use technology properly, it affects our relationships in a bad way. However; when we use it properly, it is very useful. I think there is not any outstanding mistake in terms of grammar. She expressed  her opinions very well.