Peer Evaluation 1

I am going to write about Tuğçe Nur Çakal’s Reflection Task 3. She is a jury member of the committee choosing the person of the year and she explains why she wants to choose Lady Gaga. It is a little bit long writing but it is not boring. She says Lady Gaga did not make much contribution to music world but she made a lot of contribution to society and world. I liked the way she explains Lady Gaga’s contribution to society and world. Her grammar is good and sentences are good. I cannot see any outstanding mistake. I liked her paragraph. It is nice.